
Brittany,
Your summaries are written in a clear and concise manner and your responses display empathy but could bring in a bit more from coursework. A few spelling and grammar errors present. Try reading your work out loud; sometimes your ears pick up errors that your eyes miss.
Variety of topics: floods, volcano, hurricane, earthquake, avalanche, wildfire, earthquake, flood. 8 articles is great but you didn’t get an even balance of 2 per section of the Geosphere.
Five entries for the Television Journal – you’re the first to have accomplished this goal!
Your Disaster is certainly realistic and consistent with what would happen in reality. It would have been nice if you worked in the Mercalli scale with your write-up. Your parting paragraph discussing what is happening with the plates could have been more developed and included earlier in the article. I liked how you had the disaster on your birthday (Cinco de Mayo) too bad it didn’t hit Mexico!
Overall level: 4-/4
gds
Your summaries are written in a clear and concise manner and your responses display empathy but could bring in a bit more from coursework. A few spelling and grammar errors present. Try reading your work out loud; sometimes your ears pick up errors that your eyes miss.
Variety of topics: floods, volcano, hurricane, earthquake, avalanche, wildfire, earthquake, flood. 8 articles is great but you didn’t get an even balance of 2 per section of the Geosphere.
Five entries for the Television Journal – you’re the first to have accomplished this goal!
Your Disaster is certainly realistic and consistent with what would happen in reality. It would have been nice if you worked in the Mercalli scale with your write-up. Your parting paragraph discussing what is happening with the plates could have been more developed and included earlier in the article. I liked how you had the disaster on your birthday (Cinco de Mayo) too bad it didn’t hit Mexico!
Overall level: 4-/4
gds